Hi,

Recently I started writing adult fiction with sort of a, say, fetish touch and I'd love to share my first enema punishment story with you... would love to get your feedback - just to see if I do suffer from the lack of writing skills as people say or not

So, here it goes... http://mybdsmstories.com/soapy-enema-punishment-of-humble-naked-slavegirl/

Thanks for your attention.